Nice
The character drawings were good, but there was a lot of standing around and tweening. Maybe a little more character animation to make it interesting at some parts. The sound was very clear, but the talking was a bit slow at parts. Otherwise, nice job, very slick. It'll do very well.
You knew you'd get front page
Quit acting like you're surprised, it's got a fad joke and what little is animated is fairly well-done. It looks like you're an okay animator, and I have no doubt that you could make something sick. But I gave you a 6, because you animated about 10 seconds, then just had a slideshow with the same looping symbol playing on the side of the screen on each picture. No offense I hope, just seems like a quick fix. And no, I don't find that 9000 joke funny.
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You did a sick job on this, man! The character designs were good, the animation was eerily clean and smooth, the sound was well mixed, and you mixed tweening and frame-by-frame so seemlessly, one of my eyes still thinks you didn't use any tweening at all. Keep up the good work man! You've inspired me.
thnx! but I think I need to tween more stuff, it is just insane to frame by frame so much, drains so much time!
Dang good story
The story was great, it kept my attention through the flash, because I was honestly about to turn it off until Zakk Wylde threw the water bottle. There were a few twists that made the flash entertaining and unpredictable. A little criticism, I'd just practice making my drawings a bit more appealing. For the most part, they looked like the were pretty "thrown together", and then there was so many traced bitmaps it wasn't even funny. There's potential here, just needs some improvements as far as artistic value, but the sound, and the story you created was excellent.
That was sick
Some of the best fight choreography I've ever seen. Shame it was sticks, but just...wow... I would pay you to choreograph fights for my flashes, that would be a 4.50 if it had real fleshed out characters. Keep up that good work, you've inspired me.
Well done! But wasn't hilarious.
I like the presentation, definately well done, good animation and tweening was solidly placed. And kudos to anyone who can make a cartoon series with good continuity. I just didn't find it funny, which is strange because I love violent humor. You're a beast of an artist, and I think Alex Seryoua was a work of art, I guess I just wasn't feeling this one. Didn't find it funny, but well done. I'd rather see you pursue your new series.
This one grew on me
Normally I'm against the video game parody thing, but this one had good anatomy, animation and was funny. It was kind of short, but was entertaining foreal, I still think you could make a sweet original work if you decided to. But if you wanna do videogames, that's you, I know you're getting paid for it. Keep up the good work, do all your flashes like this! lol
If you were going for an anime feel, you killed it
You hit the anime nail right on the head. The character designs were solid, the animation connected suprisingly well, and the voice acting was clear and professional, if not realistic. I guess the problem here that I picked up on is that with the perfect anime mimic came a mimic of anime's issues as well. The reason I can say this is because I've done the exact same thing, and am trying to fix it now. I just wanted to make that clear so that I don't come across as a hypocrite, I can just spot it easily.
The scenario just doesn't stand out, the story is pretty typical anime fare. There's this cold, emotionless main character who has no personality whatsoever and brings nothing interesting to the story. And the voice actors seemed like they were trying too hard, and everything is pretty one-dimensional. The cold character is cold 24/7. The spunky girl is spunky 24/7. The friends have no other purpose in the story other than to try to cheer up the main character when really, in real life, personality-less people like that are unbearable. Maybe just a touch of realism would help, mix things up a bit, add something new to the anime genre like Samurai Champloo, Dead Leaves or the Boondocks did. Don't worry, I'm dealing with similar issues in my own work, it's all good. Good luck with that, the animation looks great.
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