JazLyte's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[A Beautiful Life]

Looks like you worked hard on it

Really good, I didn't understand ANYTHING going on here, but the visuals and music all fell into place. good job

[I Am Christmas]

I like random, but the end killed it.

The animation was pretty good, but the word bubble for the zombie talking was a bad choice, you probably should've just asked somebody to act that out for you. Also, the transforming dog may have been funny if there was some type of set-up or comedy beforehand... I don't know what it is but after the first minutes or so, when that happened, my face didn't change at all. It was okay.

[Ed & His Inner Demons #2]

Pretty funny, and original

The jokes were well placed and random at the same time, which I can't possibly imagine how you managed to do that...But great flash for it's goal, when I saw the colorless guy at the dumpster, I almost closed it out, but it was worth watching all the way through heheh

[Castle Repercussion - TSR]

Looks great as ever!

You know I'll be lookin' for it, looks great! The style took me a sec to adjust to, but I appreciate originality, and especially when it's done well! Keep it up, I love the dark grittiness, overflows with style.

Get-lost responds:

Thanks alot

[Primal War 15]

Nice work! But has some flaws...

First off, I REALLY like the whole vicious animal war premise ALOT. The character drawings are great, though the plot leaves me a lil' clueless sometimes because they grunt and growl instead of talking. But it's original, and a concept I'm willing to learn to cope with. The only complaint I have with some of your movies is the cleanup, which wouldn't take long at all to fix, just watch for holes in the characters and that's it, also, the sound isn't all that impressive, but I know that's easily fixed. Peace. Great job.

[Abandoned Outbreak: Part2]

NICE ORIGINAL MOVIE

I liked the 3D, and the dark, gritty feel alot. I love original series too, so even more points for that. However, the character drawings/animation need work, and I can't even mark you down too much for that, because I know you're capable of fixing it I'd just say work on the anatomy. Otherwise, nice work, great idea.

[Naruto - theatre 2]

Hah, oh wow.

Not much of a Naruto fan, but some parts were pretty funny. I'd work on the art a lil, otherwise, it was a fun movie. Peace ;)

[TNAO:- The Beast P1]

Detroit? Where'd all those white people come from?

Nice movie, not too convinced it's Detroit. I lived there 14 years and I only saw white people as teachers when I went to school in Southfield, haha. Anyways, the line drawings were on point and gritty, which I liked. Maybe could've used either more fBf or intricate tweening. Otherwise, it was pretty good. The coloring was nothing special, I think it should be a little more stylized. Also, it was kinda tacky only having one characters have voices, but I look forward to seeing it after a lil' improvement. Peace.

[Cyclops Lincoln]

Just the random mess I come here to see

That was pretty funny for a quick laugh. Nice.

[Madness: Deus Ex Machina]

You know I actually didn't wanna watch this...

because it was a madness cartoon, but I guarantee that if that madness dude was this sweet, I would be a fan. And I swear you are the best coloring artist on Newgrounds! Great job! P.S. That advice you gave me awhile back came in handy, thanks. Peace.