Looks like alot of effort.
Well, let's see. The art was really good, especially the backgrounds and sceneries. It had good length, not too long, not too short. You definately got skill.
Just for some constructive criticism tho, it was alittle slow. That's just me, don't get me wrong, it was very good, but it kinda seemed to drag on alittle much (don't worry, I'm guilty of the same thing). And the voice acting was alittle weird, it kinda sounded like the guy was having a hard time breathing, and the playscreen was a bit too small, considering it had that huge frame around it.
However, all and all, it had a lot of effort into it and was pretty tight. So I give it a thumbs up. ^_^
Good luck wit the next one!