Good Work!
Don't listen to that last dude, man. I like it, the tweens were expertly executed and it does keep your attention. But it was kinda video-gamish. There wern't many close-ups, and there was little to no frame-by-frame. Plus, the camera prety much never changed positions like a 2D metroid game. Unless you were goin' for videogame, in that case, good job. Anywayz, the characters were very well done, and I really like the main character. She's interesting and mysterious, which I think is gonna make alot of ppl come back for more. The music was also well chosen. Aight, I'm done jabberin, I'm bout to go watch part 2.
Keep it up!