JazLyte's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jargon: Pilot Part 1]

Good! But some major flaws...

I'll start out with the good points.
For one, the characters wer pretty funny and interesting. Not much was said about them, maybe you could have done a little introduction for all of them like you did with the sadistic frog dude. Also, the writing wasn't bad at all, nor were the character drawings. A bit lazy at times, but solid enough. However, one thing ruined it: The Animation. The animation was terrible and really, most of it wasn't how you drew it, it was the FPS you chose. What was it like 5 frames per second? That didn't work, man, maybe study the walk cycle a little better too.
All and all, it wasn't bad, the humor was entertaining enough and the length was perfect, but please choose a different framerate next time, at least 10-12. Othe than that, you did a good job, have great ideas and I look forward to the next one. :)

TheRedSkick responds:

Thanks, your right about the frame rate, I only had a few weeks to get this done so I had to rush it a bit, also this is just pilot so I have jumped in to the middle of the story, I'm glad that the characters came through for most people. When I start the series proper the animation will be of a better standard as well as the voice acting, thank you for your comments.

[Sci-Fi Guys 3]

Well...I like RAB better

Reason being, these just seem so rushed, as in they seem to be out way too fast, and it doesn't seem like there's as much power into it. You're a pretty familiar face here on NG and I can see that SFG is gaining popularity and you are a funny dude who can make a dang good cartoon, but I don't get that same rare hilarity that I got from RAB, something's missing ya know. You do put these out kinda fast, maybe it's just me. But I can't even make myself watch the whole thing at once a lot of times. It'll probably get better though as time goes on, I guess you shouldn't pour all you got into just the first episodes. Sorry for the six, just bein' honest. Good luck. Peace.

Dave responds:

I made this toon in 2000, so it's definitely not going to be up to 2003-2007 RAB standards. Read the description first, ya danged idgit! Thanks for watching. Love, Dave

[Zelda: Heart for the Hero]

Hah great job.

I'm not a Zelda player, but it was fun to watch and the animation went well with the humor. I can't think of much wrong with it. Keep it up. :)
Peace

[:: Squirrel Songs IV ::]

The art saved it from a complete 0

The girl was well drawn, so was the background. Too bad those two things were there the WHOLE MOVIE. The plot, the songs and the humor (or lack there of) had me asleep at the keyboard, I found my mouse wandering off to the exit out button on multiple occasions through a short, several minute movie. Please, do something different. This goth-emo-geek humor is getting so old. Sorry, but that's how I feel about it. I'm pretty new to flash and I can tell you that.

[K.O.F Anime - Sample]

This looks great? 2.58????

That just doesn't make any sense, maybe it's the screensize, it is INCREDIBLE SMALL. You should go to the options and double the size. The animation is really short too. Otherwise, to me it looks really good. At LEAST a 3.0.

[Kazahana: Kendrick & Ben]

Aight, diversity!

Good flash man. Refreshing to actually see ONE black guy on Kazahana, along with some hip hop too. So sick of seeing the same things on this site. Anyways, it wasn't perfect, the drawings were a little undetailed at times, but the main characters were likeable, and the story was interesting. Maybe just work on the animation a little, other than that, great work! Good music choice too with the 'Boys in the Hood' beat, maybe turn up the quality a bit. Peace. ;)

[Shin ArkAngel - 02]

Underrated

This is one of the many underrated flash series here on NG and deserves a better score for the obvouis effort. But keep trying, you keep going and it'll be up there with Xin and Brackenwood. ;) Peace

[Shamoozal: Crapfest Force]

That was hilarious!

Graphics: Very nice, original and smooth, perfect for the type of cartoon.
Style: Great style, the teme, the characters, the colors, the humor, all fell into place.
Sound: Great voice actors, they truly fit the characters!
Violence: Wrestling moves and house-destroying penisses? Gold!
Interactivity: Not too much, but it's a movie.
Humor: This was hilarious, the jokes were funny and so were the crappy little flash movies, especially the frankenstein. The characters were funny too!
Overall: I liked it! I can see myself getting into this series, it's witty and well-written with a smooth style that fits it just right. Great job, man! I see front page in your future.

[Go, Go, Parody Rangers! 2]

Sweet!

Really long, but I enjoyed every minute of it! Great job! To the person about to watch this, go get a drink first. But don't drink it when they start talking, because you'll probably spit it out laughing. Peace.

[|~Love Us Forever~|]

Hey, I really enjoyed that!

Especially the part where they were shooting the guns to the beat, truly sweet, you should be proud, especially for a day and a half :) Peace