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Kalen Whitfield
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You know what
necropolix xXx
wouldnt that be some shit
Black lady havin sexy tiem wit JESUS!!!
been there, done that
My usual long-ass response coming
YAY ULTIMATUM!
You say you're not referencing anything related to Xenophobe, yet the main plot is Romeo taking revenge on the Church for killing Elixir? Sounds like a HELL OF A BIG reference! Yet that's a good thing. I'm glad it will have some strings attached to it, unlike some of your previous works which, though they do have a story and related themes, are harder to follow unless you put some effort into it.
However, that's not to say that a little effort is bad, it can be more engaging, which leads to my next point; how to tell your story. I don't think their is anything wrong with making a certain number of movies and submitting them monthly. It would always give your fans something to look forward to, but I think you should release them as you make them. I think the way you're telling it now is great. One over-arching plot that affects everyone, with smaller sub-plots for each character / group mixed into each episode. The main plot affects the smaller ones, so we as an audience see how everyone's lives are affected by everything and everyone else's actions. It makes it a large interweaving tale, but each episode could be a "One Shot" in respect to the sub-plots. Each sub-plot is a one shot that is both affected by and contributes to the overall arch, the long interweaving tale. I hope I you get what I'm saying. Turn it into a picture and you'll get it (like a tree or something). I see some of my stories told this way, and your story fits best with this style.
With this said, who gives a shit. It's not about picking as style, it's about what style of storytelling flows naturally with your story. Go with what comes naturally, but STICK WITH IT!!! I think naturally you've gone with something I've just described, and it is and will work out in the end. You just have you discipline yourself to keep with the style that is naturally flowing from your pen...words...whatever.
I hope this helps and best of luck. And now for a personal plug, CHECK YOUR EMAIL!!! I SENT YOU SHIT!!!
o_0 text wall oh god...
When I say I don't plan to reference Phobe, I mean nobody will have to see Phobe to understand what's going on, and I don't want them to have to. The cartoons will be different angles of one tale, but in no particular order or anything, hence me NOT using numbers. I think I'm just gonna make random cartoons with cool-sounding names kind of like Krinkels does.
needs more freckles
There are plenty of freckles in this cartoon
RESCOUT MY ART, NUGGAH
I don't know you hoe
finish something already
nigga dont rush me
I not can wait for negropolis ultimatum , you animation skill up much really ?!
stop reminding me of the mistake i made not naming the series negropolis in the first place, FUCK YOU
vampyro241
You should have put "W" instead of "ll" on "kill". Anyways, MID-MARCH!? I hope it's long, strong, and...NO! Honestly, if you don't want to release your episodes monthly, that's fine by mua! I have no good storylines I really prefer at the moment, but I bet yours would be better than all other cartoons. Maybe you should make a random appearance of Afro Samurai in it as well. :P
JazLyte
Thanks, and hell the fuck no, I am not putting Afro Samurai or Huey Freeman in anything I make lol.