FrozenFire 2009-06-23 18:41:20

ok.

PaperBat 2009-06-23 18:50:12

Sign on the right say Satan sucks me? xD

LewToons 2009-06-23 19:09:35

i looooove the angles u use in ur shots....way cool

A-Wahl 2009-06-23 20:27:38

I actually like it a ton! That's really good.

cantflyman 2009-06-23 21:25:00

It looks pretty damn swell. Best of luck to you man. These are hard times.

omegared 2009-06-23 21:59:30

looks great. Good luck!

DJ-Delinquent 2009-06-23 22:03:50

-Slides Jazz a $50 bill-

for Groceries my brotha

:D

XxdeathpriestxX 2009-06-23 23:26:07

Alright you work for me and here's a whore willing to do a steamboa willy for 20 bucks. get workin bitch.

Supapimp2k3 2009-06-24 01:59:05

Hot shit son, The style changes weren't too noticeable but did look a bit fitting towards the end. Also you should watch the sound, some of the dialogue was drowned out by SFX and whatnot... Unless of course you could have cared less being that this is just a clip and not a final product. But yeh, if you do make that flash as long as you planned it'll be awesome, toss in a few good FbF action/fight scenes and it'll be the new hotness...

Also big kudos to your voice actors! They really did a great job. Good to see such big changes graphically and vocally with your flashes...

CoolDrMoney 2009-06-24 03:02:50

The animation for the humans is actually pretty nice. Im surprised you dont like it but its always nice to strive for better.

I did have an issue with the way the little camera robots moved in the beginning tho

wolfkeeper 2009-06-24 06:06:28

That was AW-FUCKIN SUM, jazz. Keep it up!

Zombie-Pimp 2009-06-24 09:53:33

i dunno man, looks fine to me... You need to stop playing the tormented artist who's his own worst enemy... seriously, just have fun and get your projects out, instead of making a post telling us how much you suck every time you animate a scene.

The movement is very fluid and the detail is very nice. Sure, there's still room for improvement, and the angles and pace could be better. But your animation gets the point across, and shows an appreciable amount of effort, so just finish it up, export, submit, and move on to your next animation. Stop letting your work go to waste, we don't need a "Broken Glazz 2".

We all know how you feel, especially since xenophobe is so close to the chest for you, you want to do it justice. We all have our babies, our stories and characters we're the most passionate about, and that we'll never feel like we're good enough to do justice. Believe me, I've been too afraid to animate the next LR flash for years now. If you really don't feel like you're ready, just put this series on hold for a while and work on some other animations to improve your skills. That's what I've been doing.